languaging

This from the presentation on rubyforge:

 

Title

Wagn -- Organic Knowledge Management

I like it, though "knowledge management" is more of a business term than a geek term.  We're aiming at a pretty geeky audience on rubyforgy, right?  What about:

"Wagn - Building a Database from a Wiki"

Summary

 An elegant and innovative tool for managing structured data.

I like it less.  This seems like an audience that wants fewer pitchwords (elegant/innovative), and I think people will assume it's a database management tool or something.

maybe: Start with a wiki.  Add inclusions, formats, types, a query language...  Voila, a structured database!

 

Description

Wagn is an innovative tool for gathering and structuring
knowledge that is at once easy to use and very powerful.
It brings the wiki spirit to structured data-- making it
accessible, organic, and evolvable. 

this I like very much as is.